There was some very intriguing use of imagery within.

The character development and interaction were defining points.

You couldn't wait to get to the end (ha ha).

There was some really neat dialogue!

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Tell them you enjoyed the story and would forward it to Michael Moore ;) - he's been looking for a follow up to Canadian Bacon...

wow, you really know how to pick some good paper stock!

gee, your laser printer is really nice: what model is it?

:)

"that is one of the most interesting screen plays I've ever read, easily among the top 3". That's assuming you've only read one or two.

you could say that (stolen from a website on schopenhauer)...certainly does not apply to whatever you read, but after hearing that, she'll leave you alone.

The essential quality of this manuscript is between the body and the other objects of representation in space and time. For you, the body is known immediately and the perception of other objects is spontaneously projected, in a remaining fragment of Kant's theory of synthesis and perception, from the sensations present in the sense organs of the body onto the external objects understood as the causes of those sensations. The body itself becomes the most immediate manifestation of the will, a direct embodiment of the will-to-live

Sorry LC - you are screwed. Just try not to laugh too hard when they confront you.

Hey John - you going to be at Folsom next weekend?

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Nope - August weekends are pretty much booked for me with soccer every weekend, both days. I am trying to get to the tri for fun on the 21st, though. I really wanted to give Folsom a go, too.

I'm signed up for TFF on the 21st. Hope to see you there.

First of all you better hope he does not frequent this forum:)

If you know her target audience, tell her the story will really resonate with her target audience.

Tell her your opinion is narrow and one sided and that she should share it with others, then suggest some "friends" of yours that would appreciate reading the screenplay. hehehe

Tell her that her writing style fits her screenplay quite well.

All else fails and you can not pull it off, I can teach you to wrench.

I would love to come up there - seriously. It would be awesome. I could bore you to death with stories about my life as a political hack before technology saved me...

I guess faking your own death would be a little out of the way huh?