The Curacao Sales pitch is up: I think I used everyone's suggestions

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Thanks again guys. That was a pretty big job. Lots of resources on this page and a place to register for the training camp in Curacao itself. Obviously, I get a residual from Doug toward going on the trip myself- which is my incentive for doing it along with the fact that I really like Doug and I feel his training camp is killer.

Your suggestons were very good and helped make this a shorter job. Thanks! JIm- the idea about showing Michigan and Curacao at the same time of year was awesome. Also, the suggestions about discussing ability levels and family participation were key. I would not have included that on my own. Awesome.

Check it:http://www.bikesportmichigan.com/sales/curacaotrip.shtml

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Dang link didn’t work… Try it again:

http://www.bikesportmichigan.com/sales/curacaotrip.shtml

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I have a good idea once in a while, glad I could help.

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Paragraphs, man, paragraphs!! Now I’m cross-eyed. Maybe some headings or bullets to break up the text. Otherwise, sounds like a blast.

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OK. You make a good point. The thing I was referencing to write ad copy said the same thing, but it was getting late… (early?).