Critique my stroke (3)

I’ve been working on my open water skills and I think I’ve got it figured out. Any and all feedback is welcomed.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=y1SKcYD_0Dg

Clearly you need some work. Fly??? Well keep your head and wing tips down

Head is too high… cadence is a little slow. Need some under water views for further analysis though.

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That Owl is like “Is this working? Huh, this is working. This is working!”

Excellent sighting technique.