I read. Some good ideas some pie in the sky ones
Couple of observations:
1). He immediately says he is neither D nor R. My BS detector starts flashing....... Why did I need to know that in order to evaluate the rest
2) this is a campaign speech not an inagural speech. And the question I have (not negative) is realistically would anyone who laid these points out in a campaign ever be put in a position to give an inaugural address
3). By the time he finished point #1 there would be vomit all over the stage and front rows and potentially some politician from one of those trying to cut his mic off......
4) the gov of his state enacted point #2 at a state level. His sister ran against that gov over this point.
5). Most of the "apologies" in the preamble should be delivered on a one to one level not in a public speech. Many of them should receive return apologies.
Overall I enjoyed the read